Garyfink17's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Frog Car Animation]

A great start! I would add some bounciness to both the car and the frog.

LJ-The-HedgeCat responds:

That's a great Idea.! Thank you

[Player Killer Girls trailer]

I like the concept here, but the girls don't look very monstrous. I wouldn't have been able to tell they were monster girls if the description hadn't said so.

Brawnstone responds:

The girls look humanlike because it makes it easy to lure their prey. I'm planning to make more videos about them as well as a webcomic. In closer inspection, some of the girls have fangs instead of human molars, so that gives the audience a bigger clue about their species. Something that'll be more obvious in upcoming videos and webcomic.

Thank you so much for the feedback. ^v^

[Gilberto Adventure capitulo 3]

The captions are a little out of sync with the voiceover, though they probably aren't even necessary since you have a voiceover. Also, the music in the beginning set off a tense or more sinister tone, but the bright backgrounds kind of ruin that. I'm not sure what you were going for, but I recommend using less saturated colors in general. Other than that, everything was clear and readable.

gilberto25 responds:

Thanks

[Badness Combat - a Madness Animation]

kinda funny, makes me think about how Hank's adventures would go if he were really bad at his job

[Soda.Fla]

I like the idea here, but that kill wasn't very satisfying. I'm not really sure what deimos even did.

[THE MAGIC WAND]

Seems like a funny character, and I wouldn't mind seeing a longer video of him.

[Deimos Destiny]

that engineer hopping down the stairs was oddly...cute?

[Madness Subject 001]

Remember the 12 principals of animation, even if you're working with sprites. Don't be afraid to linger on frames or make things move slowly. Timing is the biggest issue here, I think. You got potential here, I can't wait to see how you improve.